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so cute
Poke it
She likes being poked
Lets do this ma niqqa
PROS:
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THOSE PANTS ;A;
Things to be improved:
Okay imma type this bit properly, basically ill start from her head down to make things a bit easier to explain
1. Her shoulders dont seem to properly line up with her neck, if you know what I mean, her left shoulder (our right) is too high up and doesn't line up with her neck, and her right shoulder (our left) has the same issue, only not as much, also her right shoulder is more squared off or 'flat' than her left one c: So basically make sure the shoulders look even and line up with the neck right. I advise to just sketch out her body first and add and overlapping hair etc... afterwards uwu
2. Her crotch is too high up, and wouldn't be as flat. Basically get some reference poses from Google and places like that, posemaniacs.com is a great place for lots of poses, its a bit confusing at first but once you know how to navigate it its fine c: And they have some really good poses oAo
3. Her thighs wouldnt be as chunky just at the middle, if her thighs were meant to be that size, either the gap inbetween the top of her legs/crotch would be smaller, OR her butt cheeks would be showing in the gap. Again, I recommend references and stuff for it nwn
4. (last one) HER TAIL IS FLOATING D: Make sure its actually connected to her spine lololol, it starts pretty much where her belly button would be, again sketch basic first to make sure everything is connected and add topical details after like hair and clothes and stuff~
OKAY THATS IT
I hope I helped ;o; Also bear in mind om not perfect at anatomy, so practice your ass off uAu
QURRRRLLLL
MAI BROTATO
MAI NIQQA
I LOVE YOU
Thank youuu ;A;
I'LL REDRAW IT AFTER I STOP BEING LAZY
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